tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post4318500000422141530..comments2024-03-18T00:52:48.596-07:00Comments on prayaga: The Downpours!rudraprayagahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-18212775501475255212013-07-26T10:26:22.210-07:002013-07-26T10:26:22.210-07:00Thank you.Thank you.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-10407612160600419492013-07-15T10:37:05.002-07:002013-07-15T10:37:05.002-07:00Thank you.Thank you.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-69820636850129762812013-07-15T10:35:56.090-07:002013-07-15T10:35:56.090-07:00Thank you,SG.Thank you,SG.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-18295154649696497502013-07-15T10:35:13.624-07:002013-07-15T10:35:13.624-07:00Thank you, Richa.Thank you, Richa.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-62467774699259469492013-07-15T10:34:35.780-07:002013-07-15T10:34:35.780-07:00Thank you,sulekha..Thank you,sulekha..rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-61335448168970477202013-07-15T10:33:56.543-07:002013-07-15T10:33:56.543-07:00Thank you.Thank you.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-85513588346739875862013-07-15T10:33:22.657-07:002013-07-15T10:33:22.657-07:00Thank you,madam.Thank you,madam.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-31904065433786251792013-07-15T10:32:32.018-07:002013-07-15T10:32:32.018-07:00Thank you for the suggestion.I mean here the shade...Thank you for the suggestion.I mean here the shade of trees fall as designs on grassy velvet.Then I connected the foliage with rain.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-75896571808842988952013-07-13T06:37:42.428-07:002013-07-13T06:37:42.428-07:00Loved your imagination ... this was too good!Loved your imagination ... this was too good!Privy Trifleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05317530852098436444noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-21009092634335333112013-07-12T06:39:07.326-07:002013-07-12T06:39:07.326-07:00good one..u created a nice image of monsoon!good one..u created a nice image of monsoon!Ankita https://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-69113386404253641022013-07-12T00:35:22.523-07:002013-07-12T00:35:22.523-07:00ahh.. the serene piece..
I could mentally draw th...ahh.. the serene piece.. <br />I could mentally draw the picture of rain pouring :)Jyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-42478233980579985222013-07-11T13:38:32.074-07:002013-07-11T13:38:32.074-07:00What a lush beautiful world you described. I am i...What a lush beautiful world you described. I am in awe!<br /><br />Kathy<br />http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.comAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11564863484894692249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-53639777806641685452013-07-11T08:53:47.743-07:002013-07-11T08:53:47.743-07:00Just beautiful.Just beautiful.SGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05790347071764332430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-4378617231077253432013-07-11T08:49:54.719-07:002013-07-11T08:49:54.719-07:00wow you have written a set! some work! all of them...wow you have written a set! some work! all of them quite beautiful :)<br /><br /><a href="http://subzeroricha.blogspot.in/" rel="nofollow"> Richa</a>Richa Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18147592329627851095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-268901097245647692013-07-11T02:36:10.081-07:002013-07-11T02:36:10.081-07:00Your imagination is good, I would again suggest si...Your imagination is good, I would again suggest simplifying . Hope you understood my point.anilkurup59https://www.blogger.com/profile/07961961217418715354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-88792290771143563092013-07-10T23:44:33.054-07:002013-07-10T23:44:33.054-07:00Very soft, pleasing and picturesque poem.Very soft, pleasing and picturesque poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06682758228934966786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-73703875469029878192013-07-10T23:41:02.116-07:002013-07-10T23:41:02.116-07:00That is a great attempt !
If I may give a suggesti...That is a great attempt !<br />If I may give a suggestion - how about using crisper sentences and avoiding repetition of similar words (velvety grassy greenland, foliage, trees)<br />This will make the haiku even more beautiful and help you maintain the syllable count of 5-7-5 as well ! Tall Girl in Japan https://www.blogger.com/profile/14397227521970178132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-23416205363229202182013-07-10T10:52:16.525-07:002013-07-10T10:52:16.525-07:00Thank you.Thank you.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9075805523325519390.post-61104579003454402262013-07-10T08:09:19.059-07:002013-07-10T08:09:19.059-07:00That's a nice picture painted. Good one!That's a nice picture painted. Good one!Kajal Kapurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07632634162418541211noreply@blogger.com