Part-1 (It will end in two parts.)
Short Story
Short Story
It was a fine morning. Vishnu was standing at one of the
bath areas(kulikkadavu) of the river close at hand. His was a small house which
was not annexed with a suitable toilet. So some days he assigns the mango
leaves to take up the duty of cleaning his teeth. He grants leave for his brush
and paste those days. He positioned himself resting the left hand on the tree
with a slight slant for the body. His right hand was busy with brushing his
teeth with a rolled mango leaf. A sort of pleasant atmosphere with a slim cool
of ending winter bounded him.
The aroma of a bullet-wood flower(Elanji) flew about just
all over and a part of it found a route to his nose. He picked a few flowers
from the ground, while brushing the teeth and enjoyed its amusing smell . The
natural scent created an enthusiastically charming mood in his mind. The ixora
though not sweet-smelling, in an eye-catching way blinked at him.
As he finished his brushing he strode down to
the water and washed the mouth. He dived into the water and his physique as an
athlete got caught into swimming fun. Some dry as well as green leaves were
flowing along with the current. Without much purpose he tried to lift one two
leaves in his hand. All of a sudden all his glee left room for anxiety, as
something untoward touched his hand and struck his sight. Fretfully he noticed
that a human head was rising and sinking in the water. At the spur of the
moment as an act of reflex he caught hold of its waving short hair.
He strove hard and
somehow he saw that the owner of the hair was on the bank. It was a lad of
around 10 years. Some inner spirit of Vishnu poured audacity to conduct first aid which helped the boy open the eyes
very drained. No sooner did his raucous voice flash through the air than a man
standing not too far took to his toes to the venue. The latter being aware of
the boy’s whereabouts called in his father, Thomas. He arrived at the location
as soon as he received the message. He sensed something alarming. People crowded there and consoled Thomas to
circumvent panic and stop the outbreak of anguish. Reaching nearer his lower
limbs grew heavier. He fainted on seeing
his son horizontal on the ground.
Some compassionate hearts rushed with the laddie and father
to the hospital at the nearest. Detecting satiety himself in the sensible
action of his, Vishnu reached home. He recounted the whole happening in front
of his mother, who impatiently waited for her son to serve breakfast.
sarala [to be cntd to 2nd part]
sarala [to be cntd to 2nd part]
oh this is getting interesting!going over to part 2
ReplyDeleteenjoyed the narrated:)
Thank you,Panchali
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