Thursday, June 27, 2013

Crescendo!


siblings of  fine rains
Are dandy crescendo, diminuendo.
Rains ha! Ambrosia..

Intermittent rains
In monsoon plunge with vibration. 
Crescendo, vibrato for ears. 

People in deep sleep under
verge on monsoon days feel happy.
 Alas! alarm perturbs calm..

Song sung in Crescendo,
Diminuendo, right  charms your heart.
 Aha! How heart-winning. 

sarala
For http://haiku-heights.blogspot.in/

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8 comments:

  1. smJune 27, 2013 at 12:01 PM

    beautiful

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  2. SGJune 28, 2013 at 7:44 AM

    Nice haiku. We can enjoy rain as long as we are safely at home,

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  3. Rama AnanthJune 29, 2013 at 11:19 PM

    Lovely thoughts, beautifully expressed.

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  4. anilkurup59June 30, 2013 at 2:22 AM

    When I read this and I did it a few times, I always felt that perhaps you could make the words lighter so that they blend into a poem.

    Hope you take it well.

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  5. rudraprayagaJuly 1, 2013 at 2:42 AM

    Thank you,SG,Rama,Anil.

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  6. Privy TriflesJuly 8, 2013 at 11:42 AM

    Wow.. this was is so magical, just like the rains!

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  7. rudraprayagaJuly 9, 2013 at 12:51 AM

    Thank you, me.

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