For http://writetribe.com/20-quotes-about-writing/
and http://writetribe.com/i-me-and-myself/
These two stories
I link here with two prompts of Writetribe. These two letters bring about
changes in lives. And 'I, Me and Myself ' prompt is also highlighted here.
‘If you want to
change the world, pick up your pen and write’. ― Martin Luther
Love from Soul!
Vidarbha’s princess Rukmini, King
Bhishmaka’s daughter wanted to wed Sreekrishna, the doorsill of all appeals and
abode of all goodness. Her brother Rukmi in odium about Krishna chose Shishupal
for her.
She felt it a bolt from the blue. Assimilate that she couldn’t. Rukmin’s heart
ached. Sleep deserted her. Stomach turned away from food. Smile waned from
lips. Uneasiness haunted her.
“If I want to change the world around me, I
should write to Krishna. I’ll initiate myself for that,” her mind whispered.
Her letter a trustworthy Brahmin
took to Krishna. The Most Benevolent Lord rose to the occasion.
For http://writetribe.com/i-me-and-myself/
I,Me and Myself
To God!
To God!
My mind remains with*1 Amma and *2 Ammoomma. Both
are in the sky.
None wanted me in the house. Step-mother
battered me horridly. *3 Achchan took her side.
Every day I searched in the sky for them.
One day I wrote to God about my
difficulties. I went to post it myself.
Then the post-uncle came there for
collecting letters.
He read my card. He changed God’s address and sent it to
court.
The court sent me to this
foster-home. Now I am happy here. I have loving mothers and many friends to go
to school. I read in third.
*1-Mother, 2-Grandmother, 3-Father.
Both are nice.We know about the first but the second one I liked best for the kind act of the postman.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Partha.
DeleteHari OM
ReplyDeleteSuch devotion and trust is always repaid - not always how we expect! YAM xx
Thank you,Yamini.
DeleteBeautiful stories. I liked the second one much better. The postman uncle came as a "deivam manushya roopena" - God in disguise of a human being.
ReplyDeleteYes, sometimes God responds to our desire in the form of man.Thank you,SG.
DeleteA good story....
ReplyDeleteThanks
Thank you,Krishna.
DeleteBoth stories are most appropriate for the prompt. Very well written. Enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThank you.Ma'am.
ReplyDelete‘If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write’. ― Martin Luther
ReplyDeleteGreat leader
well said
Thank you,sm.
DeleteBoth takes are simply brilliant. Love the second one as well, so empowering:)
ReplyDeleteThank you,Vishal.
DeleteThe post man always rings twice. well well that was a movie. How ever I loved this piec
ReplyDeleteHere I meant the posting-move from the child's side and postman's visit at the post box coincided.I have to follow word-limit. Thank you, Anil.
ReplyDeleteLoved the stories :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you,Amrit.
DeleteReally touching - the 2nd one..
ReplyDeleteAnd I loved the way you connected an epic with a simple feelings of a child... Also appreciate the way you have re-emphasized the importance of writing your heart out :)
Thank you,Loco.
DeleteWonderful take through mythology & real-life story. The second one is so touching...
ReplyDeleteThank you,Anita.
DeleteVery nicely written dear!
ReplyDeleteThank you,Privy.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful stories! The second one is really touching!! It shows how a simple act can make such a big difference to another person's life.
ReplyDeleteThank you,pro.
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