[Urmila
and Sharmila are sisters. The elder one Sharmila was in love with Vinod, her
neighbour, even when they passed through the school-age. Father had brought
proposals which she resisted tooth and nail, though she knew not the result. Two-three
ones she escaped on the pretext of studies. She recalled her baby-hood memories
in which Vinod always sided with her in all the activities. A squad of six used to engage themselves in
kiddies’ amusements a lot. Whenever Urmila tried to retrieve her mind from the
memories, it did not obey her. Again it went on a tour to the backyard of mind.
Urmila bloomed into the synonym of beauty and Vinod grew into a handsome personality. Finally father held a
good proposal close to his heart.]
Now
pl.read.
The time skipped over days one, two, three etc. and more. In
those days something was jabbing at Urmila’s heart which itself had fallen into a
melancholic mood. It was nothing but the matrimonial steps of her parents that
pricked her hurtfully.
“Urmi, you are lucky, the horoscopes are fully agreeable,”
words effusively flowed from Achchan’s
mouth, as soon as he made his entry into his domicile.
He turned to his wife Sharada, “Now we have to look into further
formalities. I shall call the groom’s party soon. Why to delay.”
“Achcha, how can we know about his character and other
knowhow’s?”
“O! That you don’t worry, I will get all his details. His
job, education and family are all very good. Character also may be good. We’ll inquire.”
He didn’t view Urmila’s expression that reflected the image
of her thoughts. Her body attained a mechanical move and reached the study room
that was her sole solace when in worry. Tears waited for no pause and so they
freely flowed down and her cheeks turned sodden. Sniffing and sobbing turned
the room’s air soggy. Sharmila watching all this smelt something shady in
Urmila’s actions and hence her legs led her to Urmila’s room.
“ Chechchi, why are you crying when parents speak about marriage? I think you have someone in your
mind. Do you have any affair? Tell me.”
Urmila put apart the shutters of her heart in front of her
sister a bit reluctantly though and the latter got stunned at the news. She was
never dubious of her sister’s ways. She thought Vinod was as good a friend as
others were. She remained bewildered rather unfeeling for a while.
“O! Chechchi, very clever you are. I never noticed any sign
in your behaviour. What to do, now? Let’s tell Amma about it. She may
understand you. Chechchi, but Achchan’s stand we can’t predict.”
Though they had vacation they wanted a holiday for Achchan. The next day was a Sunday. So somehow both the sisters got a
comfortable time for disclosing the matter to Amma so that it would be forwarded to
Achchan.. Sharmila sparked the beginning and Urmila, taking the aid of fumbling
and stammering, divulged to Amma about the affinity between Vinod and herself.
“God! what am I
hearing? Didn’t you get anybody else? Vinod’s grandfather was a caretaker and
an aid to your grandfather. Don’t you know that?” Amma’s tone contained scorn
and surprise.
“I don’t know if your Achchan will agree or not,” Amma resumed
the original tone.
“Amma, please Amma, understand her. Stand by her. Make him
agree.”
Amma looking into his mood and mode of behavior slowly
presented the subject to him after some time. The upshot was a bomb-blast as she
expected.
“No, never. I cannot agree,
I’ll not also. You shouldn’t support her,” thunderous was the voice that emerged from an orthodox mentality.
Achchan- father, Amma- mother, Chechchi- elder sister. [to be contd.]
Hari Om
ReplyDelete....uh-oh...... YAM xx
Thank you,Yamini.
DeleteStory is going well....
ReplyDeletethanks
Thank you,Krishna.
DeleteThank you,Krishna.
DeleteHello greeting and good wishes.
ReplyDeleteThis is a gripping love story. The next chapter will be explosive.
I feel sorry for Sharmila who is ready to sacrifice her love for Vinod to make her sister happy, The father is a very a very conservative man. But he means well for his daughter. He is concerned about her long term happiness. There is a great suspense now. Does Vinod love Urmila OR is he in love with Sharmila or some one else.? Will Urmila run away with Vinod as in the case of the movie BOBBY?. Will Sharmila help her to run away on the day of the wedding ?
Well, well, well, I can't wait to read the next post.
Best wishes
The best of all wishes to you too. Sharmila is a mere friend of Vinod.Urmila and Vinod are in love.Thank you for the comment,Joseph. It seems you are a mallu.
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ReplyDeleteI ve missed the early parts of this piece you have posted.Nevertheless.
Thank you for visiting.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting. Waiting for the next chapter. Just one question. When Sharmila is the elder sister, what is the hurry for younger sister Urmila's wedding? (May be i missed something from the previous chapters.)
ReplyDeleteUrmila is elder.Her wedding wais being arranged.Thank you SG.
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ReplyDeleteprogressive days will make it right
story is going well
Thank you,sm.
DeleteWell expressed. Nice story.
ReplyDeleteHappens in the movies & real-life too :)
Thank you,Anita.
DeleteThis is like DDLJ with a twist..,
ReplyDeleteWhat is going to happen, I am still thinking...
Will Urmila also convince herself that love and marriage is two different things!
Um, wait a little more.Thank you
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