Friday, December 22, 2023

The Castle in the Air!


 

The name Amita Raj, gifted her parents;

a youth, just twenty-three years old,

looking pretty, bearing a smile of gold,

she was in the morn of her life.

 

Her face was a cute bloom at the dawn,

with decent-done hair-do and modest jeans,

 to hate her, no way for others;

 her visage was painted in charming manners.

 

Her greatest dream was soaring in the air,

displaying her doctoring with faults rare.

She was content, had no gloom,

and of course her work was her plume.

 

Ready she was to follow any trend,

sensing love and mercy as an apt blend,

fixing a stethoscope around her neck,

moved she, as a kin among the sick.

 

Like a honeybee toiling around plants

Fluttering to earn dainty in plenty,

Amita kept helping for the ailing,

be off their ache by words so sweet.

 

Alas! one day, a man in rags, insane,

 sharp scissors into her neck, inserted;

 intense narcotics, very dense

had sucked entirely his common sense.

 

A doctor with a mind full of ideas

to cure sincerely, the destitute,

had built a Castle of good thoughts;

God! It was a palace in the air. 

15 comments:

  1. You convey her character very well, which emphasises the sad pointlessness of her ending. It's good, I think, that her story is told and all the good she did remembered.

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  2. It's a wonderful story of her life, with so very much a helping mind, shortened way too soon. My favorite line is "be off their ache by words of consoling." Shows her character and also a good bedside manner which is important to those in the medical business. I know she will like her new castle and will have many stars in her crown.
    Thanks for peeking in on me.
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  3. In shadows of white coats, Amita Raj once stood,
    A healer's touch, a heart so pure and good.
    Tragedy struck, a life cut short and fast,
    In memory's embrace, her legacy will last.

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  4. Wow...what a powerful poem ! I wish I could think of a more elegant way of expressing....gob smacked !....Rall

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  5. Happy new year to you and your family Sarala

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  6. Well written and happy new year to you :)

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