A Dreadful
Determination!
[Urmila and Sharmila are sisters. The
elder one Sharmila was in love with Vinod, her neighbour, even when they passed
through the school-age. Father had brought proposals which she resisted tooth
and nail, though she knew not the result. She recalled her baby-hood memories
in which Vinod always sided with her in all the activities. A squad of six used to engage themselves in
kiddies’ amusements a lot. They played in and with water and sand, dawdled time
in group games and funs during their babe-stage. Whenever Urmila tried to
retrieve her mind from the memories, it did not obey her. Again it went on a
tour to the backyard of mind.]
Now pl.read.
Now pl.read.
Urmila had bloomed into a matured girl. Nature had applied all her
pretty art work on her. She painted Urmila with ample eye-catching hues. Brown
silken hair-covered crown beautified her head and two black curved bows adorned
the attractive forehead. Two petals of lotus with a brown tint in two sockets ornamented
the cheeks. The right figured elevation above the mouth decorated the face and
soft red chillies covering the mouth, decked with a winning smile amplified
her cuteness.
Her colour was not so fair
though, the beautifully-shaped body with the right curves and flats made her
stand out from all others. She was a stunning beauty. The word ‘smart’ well
suited to depict her.
Vinod was burly in his make. He, the six-footer with expanded chest and
mighty brawns that earned for him the title ‘handsome’, was very much
masculine. He was slightly fairer than Urmila. The friends who were aware of their
affair used to comment on them that they were ‘made for each other’. Akhil,
Anand and George extended their untainted support and aid.
The youngsters had earmarked the
bullet wood tree’s bottom area on the other side of the mini forest(Kaavu) for
their meeting. That was not much discernible as it stood in the extension of
other woods. Staying away from her sister Sharmila was truly hard. But some way
or other they had the hap to remain unnoticed by her always.
Enjoying the appeasing aroma of
the bullet wood’s blooms they exchanged their hearts. They whispered from mind
to mind. They sat speechless for hours looking into each other’s eyes. In
accordance with the passage of time, their courtship got garnished with
inseparable feelings. Smile sometimes transformed into laughter and words into
sentences. The very sight of each other sparked glimmer in their eyes and
pleasure in their soul. Each one felt that God had created them for their
union.
Whenever they chose the ground around the tree to pass their yen, Breeze
cooled their minds, Birds sang love song for them, Twigs patted and pampered them
with tender strokes and even Autumn stopped pouring to smooth the progress of
their closeness. The warmth of their togetherness delighted the beings and
stimulated the surroundings that facilitated the duo with comforts. Their love
was deep from the soul and so it was uncontaminated at that stage.
They shared their glee and gloom with each
other. They planned their future actions. They built castles in minds and
solved numerous interrogations that arose in enormity.
“Will your parents favour us, dear?” Vinod
“I don’t know, what about you, Vinu?”
“I can make them agree.”
“My parents also may agree. Achchan is
strict, but loving. He will stand by his daughter, I think. ”
“Eh! Let’s see, let’s finish our studies
first.”
Quite often they solved that significant question
in their own ways.
Urmila’s
achchan, Venugopal and Vinod’s achchan
Sreekumar were intimate friends. Both the families held fairly an equal
position in pecuniary status. Both had an upper hand in the society’s say. Both
were crop-cultivator s, though they were well-employed . But there was a level-discrepancy
with regard to the families’ ethnical grade.
Urmila’s family had been
upholding its middle class repute-form from the preceding four generations at
least, whereas Vinod’s grandparents were from the lower class, rather worker
category. And more or less his grandfather was a labourer and at the same time
he was the caretaker of Urmia’s family’s cultivations. But he aimed at steering
his son, Sreekumar to educational qualifications. He saved some money for his
son’s studies from whatever he earned.
Sreekumar, the lone son,
fully conversant of his situation did his best for his achchn’s desire to be
true. He also dreamt a reasonable rise in life and so his aspirations helped
him fulfill his ambitions. Urmila’s grandfather’s philanthropy many a time
lifted him from the pits of cash crunches. Sreekkumar spent a part of his domesticity for
tutorials to neighbouring broods and he earned a pretty sum thus also. And
eventually he accomplished his mission of obtaining a good job in a public
sector concern.
Venugopal had completed his education without much hitch and
hindrance and got into a job in a bank. All this know-how the children were
ignorant of.
Time waited for none and nothing and so it fluttered and scuttled
away flapping its wings. Vinod’s and Urmila’s affair had expanded in volume.
And was now Urmila on board of the final P.G and Vinod at the ground of
job-hunting after his P.G.course.
[to be contd.]
[to be contd.]
Beautiful description of Urmila and Vinod.
ReplyDeleteThank you,SG.
DeleteHari OM
ReplyDeleteIt is true; children are often oblivious to the 'human-ness' of their parents! This is growing ever more interesting... YAM xx
Thank you,Yamini.
DeleteA nice romantic story...
ReplyDeletethanks
Thank you,Krishna.
Deletemoving towards office romance or fighting becoming more interesting
ReplyDeleteThank you,sm.
ReplyDeleteTime flees... Love remains...
ReplyDeleteA rarity!
Eager to know what fate hold for them..
Good one Rudra :)
Thank you,Satya.
ReplyDeleteSounds like an interesting story!
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