The story so
far:
Urmila, when
she saw a familiar-looking person at a shop, slipped into her experiences since
childhood. Urmila and Sharmila are sisters. The elder one Sharmila was in love
with Vinod, her neighbour, even when they passed through the school-age. Father
had brought proposals which she resisted tooth and nail, though she knew not
the result. Two-three ones she escaped on the pretext of studies. She recalled
her baby-hood memories. All their friends, but Vinod flew away from the
brood for life’s needs. Vinod was in the look out of a job. Urmila’s father,
Venugopal with conventional beliefs didn’t agree for their marriage.Urmila was
forced to wed Aravind. She got separated from the groom on a lie the next day
itself. She had told him that she was a habitual consumer of Phenobarbital
medicine. Obtaining no response from Vinod she phoned up to him. Vinod obtained
a decent job and he became ready to wed Urmila. This time Vinod’s parents
resisted since Urmila was a divorcee. As both remained single, the parents came
down from their stance. Her companion Anupama woke her up from the dream.]
Now pl.read.
Next
Sunday after washing the garbs Urmila was spreading them on the cloth-line
behind her room in the hostel. The intercom of her room began to disturb her chirping
vociferously.
“Urmila, you have a visitor,” warden from
ground floor.
“Visitor! Who, today?”
Urmila
walked down with vigorous strides through the rungs of the staircase and got to
the visitor. She opened wide her visual parts to make certain that she was not
in a dream. Anand, one of her very babyhood comrades stood there with a hearty
smile. He stretched hands to shake hand with her. She reciprocated just
mechanically,
“What made you make your presence here? I wondered I was
dreaming.”
“O!
Urmila I have not expunged our camaraderie from our childhood memories. My PG
in medical course, then its subsequent super specialty and such things had
clutched me tightly. Now I am here on a two weeks leave. Then I thought of
visiting my friends. I had gone to your house to meet your parents also.”
“Okay,
Okay, be seated anyway.”
“Akhil Chacko and Goerge also will come by
tomorrow and day after. You may know that they are in Australia. We have
planned to have a get together at Bharat Tourist home here. I have selected my dame.
So I am the one who is hoisting the party. Do come for that meeting. We’ll call
Sharmila also. Date and all we’ll inform you.”
They
had a chit-chat for a few minutes. She asked nothing about Vinod and nor did
Anand mention anything about him. Anand
had had his ‘M.B.B.S’ studies in Delhi. Then his brilliance and aspiration
guided him to US for further steps. Of
course his friends all visited him in his thoughts sometimes. But the
assignments of his education used to set him fast to routines. He was back home
on a sabbatical at the interval of studies and work.
“But
Anand, don’t expect me. I have availed of almost all my leave by now. Even if
it is on Sunday, I have some important engagements. I have to do the
preparation for covering the syllabi, “she was in no doubt that Vinod would
make his presence there.
Anand’s
enthusiastic and energetic approach allowed her not to escape but nod for a
half-minded aye. It was all a planned
plot of the friends, when they learned that Urmila and Vinod remained unwedded still.
Sharmila, Urmila’s sister though was kept in ignorance earlier about the duo’s lure,
their friends all were cheering up their courtship.
It
was Anand that made the entry to home country first. He right away paid visits
to Venugopals and Sreekumars and studied their views. All the disheartening
occurrences had packed their days with desperation and disappointments. If
truth be told both the parent-couples had become like minded in tying their descendants
in wed-knot. Only thing they actually didn't know each other’s perspective.
Each
party was in need of a third person’s aid to bell their cats. And so Anand’s
arrival was like a shower in summer for
each couple. He informed them about the entire friends’ resolution to make the
twosome’s dream materialized. As a twist
of fate favourable, Anand’s betrothal fell in between. In that connection an
idea of availing of leave together popped up in the old friends’ minds. And
that idea without any pause directed the friends to fly to reality. They all
landed one after another on their native sand.
The
partying day loomed without fail. The banquet hall merrily received all the
friends. All those, who had family, arrived in pairs with their kids and Vinod and Anand who
had no family reached single. Yes, Anand also was single, since his studies
provided him no free opportunity to be in pair so far, though his pairing was not
far.
Sharmila’s fervent eyes travelled around.
Alas! Her Chechchi’s absence smashed her basking mood. The conspicuous absence
that everybody felt left all of them in poignancy.
Looking
no right and left Anand tread down quickly and without a second thought he
drove to Urmila’s hostel.
The day seemed very hot. Urmila stood on the
first floor’s verandah looking at the big Jack tree in the compound.
“It carries heavy Jack fruit for serving others.
It doesn't expect anything in return,” bore she reverence for it in mind, “No
human being can be like that.”
On
holidays the tree took pleasure in the company of hostlers, who turned the tree-guard
their gossiping seats. Whole-heartedly the tree shaded them from the Sun.
All
of a sudden a smart man parked the car out, came in and dashed to the visitor’s room. It
was none but Ananad. Urmila sensed the situation and stepped down.
“I’m
sorry Anand, I have brought bundles of papers for valuation. I have no time to
attend the party this time. Next time sure I’ll come,” she was disposing of Anand.
“Don’t
worry, I shall help you. Give me the best paper valued; on its line I can help
you,” so much sincere was his move that Urmila could not deprive him of her
presence.
“Okay
I’ll come and return soon. Agreed?”
“Hundred
percent agreed.”
Urmila
didn’t look at Vinod because she didn't want to tempt Vinod as well as her own mind;
whereas Vinod’s vision covertly viewed Urmila. They all opened the folder of old
sugary memories which enlivened and vitalized the atmosphere. A vibrant wave of
delight exhilarated the elders and the kids. They all sang, danced, cut jokes
etc. etc. Hubbub and hullabaloo had no deficit in measure, yet no participation
from the very twosome’s side.
At
one moment of their movements Urmila unknowingly happened to be somewhat nearer Vinod. With a
swirly progress towards Urmila Anand swiftly pushed Urmila towards Vinod. His
speed made Urmila slip on the vitrified tile and was about to fall down. At the
spur of a moment Vinod’s reflex acted. He stretched his hands and salvaged her
holding tightly.
All these unpredictable rapid events startled
Urmila and her vision at a sudden action plunged into Vinod’s eyes. She blushed
bashfully. The cheers thundered there reddened her face further.
P.S: I was travelling with Urmila and Vinod and their people for a few months. Now it is time to bid adieu to them. Wish
the new couple a pleasant wedded life. And
thanks to all those who accompanied me through out.
I had an idea of giving it a tragic end. But the viewers comments made me think opposite.
There may be mistakes in the story.It was getting its shape and form among hindrances a lot of home chores.
There may be mistakes in the story.It was getting its shape and form among hindrances a lot of home chores.
Hari OM
ReplyDeleteOohhhh - seems I missed and had to go back one... ah well, Bollywood influence in the end - but none the worse for that!!! This was a marathon for you - well done for seeing it through!!! You have entertained us well...YAM xx
Thank you, Yamini.
DeleteThanks for the interesting story you wrote for us. I enjoyed very much. You gave the perfect ending for the story. Just like Hollywood movies. She fell. He caught her. Their eyes met. Rest is history. (Thank God it was not like an Indian move where the director does not know how to end the movie - so drag the movie for a long time.)
ReplyDeleteThank you very much.
ReplyDeleteInteresting Story.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kahkashan.
ReplyDeleteenjoyed reading your story! Our movies will never show the heroine as a divorcee:) And then remarry:) Nice one!
ReplyDeleteThank you andhya.
DeleteAn interesting story, though I could not read the earlier episodes. Will come back to read the same..
ReplyDeleteThank you,Kailash.
DeleteI am so happy you chose a happy ending ... happy endings of love story are always so pleasant ... it was wonderful reading this piece ... looking forward to more such series from you in future :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you,Amrit.
DeleteVery happy that it ended happily... Though in real life, such happy endings are rare... Love triumphs, well write. Thoroughly enjoyed... Will miss Vinod and Urmila...
ReplyDeleteBtw... when does the next series start?
Thank you,Satya.
Deletetwist after twist and now a happy ending
ReplyDeletenice story
Thank you,sm.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyable post...
ReplyDeleteThank you,Vineeta.
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