Saturday, May 2, 2015

Misty Showers!


             
Sprays season misty
Showers; hugs mother Nature
Her kids in love-arms;

 Chill  misty showers,
Wake Nature’s kids snug in mom’s
 Hugs on Night-mattress.

Turns water God, the
Magician to strings of rains
And showers of mist.

Swirls God wand; turns ha!
Water to Pretty dew-pearls
Sleet, mist, hail and fog.

Mist-showers, curtains
raise; camouflages dawn beings,
 Figures are all vague.
 
Wears Nature, the lass
 Garbs with look misty-foggy;
 Sure stylish she is.


 For http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/and

For https://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/2015/05/

24 comments:

  1. Really so much work put in, and a lot to say in those words - I strongly urge you to break away from the chains of 5 7 5 and go for the meaning first and form second

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    1. Actually I want to do that, but viewers remind me that haiku is of 5+7+5 syllable pattern. Thank you very much for the suggestions.

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  2. A beautiful series inspired on Basho's ' misty showers'

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  3. Excellent poem. I liked the lines
    "Turns water God, the
    Magician to strings of rains
    And showers of mist."

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  4. Hmm makes one feel like out in the open in the hills on a cold, chilly, misty winter somewhere in the mountains.

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  5. O! That itself is a poem. Thank you.

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  6. beautiful poem few words say lot

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  7. I like the way you turn rain into a magical thing through your poetry. Lovely, especially the last stanza! :)

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  8. Excellent poem. Loved reading it.

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  9. Misty showers are beautiful :-)

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  10. loved the idea of the misty showers, Rudraprayaga :)
    thanks for dropping by on Drishti :)

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  11. So beautiful... Felt the mist!

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