O, you great shower!
What a striking figure!
stunning and startling
cool and very chilly,
joyful to watch and view,
carting the heart and mind
straight to your charisma;
your vigour sure is overt.
O! My dear Rain,
stop your funny game,
for now enough it is,
tired of you, we are;
hurts us your verve,
violently lashing at the windows,
with pity zero in review and
swelling cold everywhere.
We understand your might,
no need to exhibit;
your flow of force
drowns beings around,
slides abodes and soil
in plentiful masses;
not cute in rage are you,
don’t unload here your ire.
Hari Om
ReplyDeleteThe blessing and the curse neatly framed in metre! YAM xx
Thank you,Yamini.
DeleteBeautiful poem. Problem if it rains. Problem if it does not rain.
ReplyDeleteThank you,SG.
DeleteThe two faces of the rain beautifully depicted!
ReplyDeleteThank you,Padmaja.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem with the effects of rain too
ReplyDeleteThank you,Shilpa.
ReplyDeleteAmazingly writin dear pray!
ReplyDeleteYou have charming way with words and got skills to express them so nicely!
Ah here comes the true value of Balance everything we get in life
Thank u,Baily.
ReplyDeletedid she calm down?
ReplyDeletelike to think so...
Left to the readers. Thank you, deep.
ReplyDeleteThank u,deep.
ReplyDeletevery nicely sketched with your words
ReplyDeleteThank you,Sujatha.
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