Sleep vacated its abode from his
eyes and mind after the ghastly accident. The very thought of mobile motors haunted
his soul and spirit. He stared at his
amputated leg with tear-bathed face. Influxes of visitors disturbed him. No word of sympathy or empathy cheered him.
Silent sobbing disturbed the calm of his room. The visuals of his age-mates in
teens making merriment in games pierced his mind. But his beloved
class-teacher’s arrival blew a soft breeze into his bleeding heart. “You have
been selected in the National team for the scholastic contest abroad”. Her
words were ‘Food for his Soul.’
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That would lift his spirit.
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DeleteWow.That was a grand and fitting finale to your short fiction.
ReplyDeleteIt left me happy in the early moorning.
thank you.
DeleteHis teacher gave him the much required good news.Nicely written.
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ReplyDeleteAnd why not. Indeed its a great motivation to have your hard work pay off. Nice story!
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ReplyDeleteUmm that was something different.affecting.
ReplyDeleteYou have beautifully expressed the emotions in 100 words. Hope his soul is lifted and he start walking. It's sad how accidents can destroy dreams and lives.
ReplyDeleteThank you.Yes, he will collect courage and walk because of the recognition.
ReplyDeleteSo much emotions in a such short story, it is really very nice, with a good ending.
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