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I thought haiku were to be written. I had read the instructions earlier.So the deviation and sorry for that.Anyway I post them here.
I thought haiku were to be written. I had read the instructions earlier.So the deviation and sorry for that.Anyway I post them here.
For permission he
Waits not; enter
wherever
He wants, Ant the Great.
Pressure or sugar,
Care Ants never; eat so they
Meat, sweet and biscuits
On garnet beads of
Grapes or dangling fruits sweet and
Ripe, lope Ants impish.
Falling in line March
Forward the Ants with steady
Speed. Attack the
foes.
I had versified 'River' ,but couldn't link here. So I link it here.
River!
Burns,
rivers, seas and
Banks,a picturesque cuteness,
God provides the Earth.
A pretty painting
Looks the
Earth. God has drawn plants,
Rivers,
hills and mounts.
Nature spreads her chains
Of White-gold on earth bed. She
Views beauty
with joy.
Nice read. Also, ants are very intelligent.
ReplyDeleteThank you,SG.
DeleteHari OM
ReplyDeleteI admire your attempts at haiku Sarala; this discipline is not one I have attempted till date. My favourite here is 'On garnet beads...' YAM xx
Thank you ,Yamini.
DeleteTotally enjoyed both..
ReplyDeleteAnd ants.. They really find home almost everywhere!
Thank you,Loco.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful series of haiku/senryu Rudra, both series are great, but the series on "river" I like the most.
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting.
Thank you,Kristjaan.
Deleteenjoyed it reading
ReplyDeleteThank you,sm.
DeleteGreat Ant!
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Thank you,Krishna.
ReplyDeleteLoved the take on ants :D
ReplyDeleteThank you,Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThe line" Garnet beads" is really captivating. Interesting thoughts.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Rama.
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