(I haven't taken it as the peace for ever.)
Cotton bundles in
Sky, spell of beauty
in eye
Mind clicks the figure .
Mesmerizing scene
Allows not mind to away go.
This is Ecstasy.
Unties who the fine
Bundle and scatters cotton
here-there? Still pretty.
Feel like lying there
And roll on cotton
sprinkled;
Rest
in comfy way.
That builds up a nice picture.
ReplyDeleteWell penned !
Thank you,ak.
DeleteThank you fr sharing.. I enjoyed your write
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DeleteMesmerizing sceneAllows not mind to away go.
ReplyDeleteThis is Ecstasy
Beautifully penned
Thank you.
DeleteAwesome series ...
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DeleteNice poem.
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DeleteUnties who the fine
ReplyDeleteBundle and scatters cotton
here-there? Still pretty.
Beautiful Rudra...
Thank you,Vinita.
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ReplyDeleteLovely poem. You have created wonderful word pictures. A moment of ecstasy, a moment of joy, a moment of happiness is something we all want. Nature provides these moments provided we take the time to see and admire.
I tremendously enjoyed your poem.
Have you read the poem about Daffodils written by William Wordsworth.
These lines always stays in my mind although I read it when i was in school.
BESIDES THE LAKE, BENEATH THE TREES
FLUTTERING AND DANCING IN THE BREEZE.
Best wishes
Thank you,Joseph.
DeleteYes, I had read it somewhere.It at that time went to both my mind and heart. Thank you,Joseph for this inspiring comment.
ReplyDeleteYes, I had read it somewhere.It at that time went to both my mind and heart. Thank you,Joseph for this inspiring comment.
ReplyDeleteWonderful word picture...beautiful ..
ReplyDeleteThank you,Kailash.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Kailash.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you,SG.
DeleteBeautiful imagery :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you,Amrit.
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