Sunday, June 28, 2015

Beauty in Sky!

(I haven't taken it as the peace for ever.)

Cotton bundles in
 Sky, spell of beauty in eye
Mind clicks the figure .

Mesmerizing scene
Allows not mind to away go.
This is Ecstasy.

Unties who the fine
Bundle and scatters cotton
here-there? Still pretty.

Feel like lying there
And roll on cotton  sprinkled;
Rest in comfy way.

24 comments:

  1. That builds up a nice picture.
    Well penned !

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  2. Thank you fr sharing.. I enjoyed your write

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  3. Mesmerizing sceneAllows not mind to away go.
    This is Ecstasy
    Beautifully penned

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  4. Nice poem.
    Ihave nominated you to write three quotes. Kindly see my blog dated29th JUNE2015

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  5. Unties who the fine
    Bundle and scatters cotton
    here-there? Still pretty.

    Beautiful Rudra...

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  6. Hello,

    Lovely poem. You have created wonderful word pictures. A moment of ecstasy, a moment of joy, a moment of happiness is something we all want. Nature provides these moments provided we take the time to see and admire.

    I tremendously enjoyed your poem.

    Have you read the poem about Daffodils written by William Wordsworth.

    These lines always stays in my mind although I read it when i was in school.

    BESIDES THE LAKE, BENEATH THE TREES
    FLUTTERING AND DANCING IN THE BREEZE.

    Best wishes

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  7. Yes, I had read it somewhere.It at that time went to both my mind and heart. Thank you,Joseph for this inspiring comment.

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  8. Yes, I had read it somewhere.It at that time went to both my mind and heart. Thank you,Joseph for this inspiring comment.

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  9. Wonderful word picture...beautiful ..

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