The baby little girl of five months was in a deep slumber.
She was lying with no trouble snuggly in her cradle. The five-year-old Ankita
was pouring all her imagination over her dear dolly seated on the floor. She
was as serious as a makeup man. She was combing its hair, putting beauty mark
on its forehead, applying cream on its cheeks and so on.
“Mole,*Amma will have a bath, just see the baby, if she
cries gently rock the cradle,” very softly her mother Suchitra.
Suchitra’s better half Vijayan had gone on duty to his
office. So no one elderly was there at home. She entered into the water-closet
and had a fast body wash. The baby started crying feebly and soon the volume of
her voice amplified. Lullaby-sound from Ankita was falling into Suchitra’s ear.
The baby’s sound became slowly feeble and somewhat reached its closure.
Suchitra felt ease in her mind, as the infant calmed down. However without
spending much time in the friendship of bathroom articles she came out.
“Ho! My Go……d,” yelped Suchitra loud and within no time she
sprang to the cradle.
The scene Suchitra eyed literally startled her. As she was
engaged in her bath the little baby started crying. The elder one Ankita turned
responsible and she slowly rocked the cradle with lullabies on the lips. The
baby paid no heed to her whereas it raised its voice. She tried multiple
methods to pacify the baby. Nothing worked. To please her mother she thought
she should soothe her sister some or other way. So she took the small pillow of
the little one and kept it on its mouth and pressed also to stop the audibility of the infant's sound. But the nostrils were also blocked under
the pillow. She believed that if the baby’s mouth was covered the sound wouldn’t
be heard. And then Amma could complete her bath.
By heaven’s help before getting the process prolonged much,
Amma was at the spot. She all of a
sudden pushed aside Ankita and lifted the infant in hand. As the infant seemed
to be motionless, Suchitra got baffled for a while. Perhaps some miracle acted
in her mind and she stroked on the baby’s chest and back shaking it forcibly
yet mildly. The baby opened her closed eyes and started crying. Though the
mother was able to heave a sigh of relief, she failed not to consult a
physician. No sooner she emerged out of her house than her luck favoured her in
the form of an auto rickshaw. And she found herself in the hospital along with her
tiny issues both. The climax turned indeed comfortable as the consultation
upshot was helpful.
“Nothing to worry, God has saved your child,” the doctor.
She looked up at the
Almighty with her tear-filled thankful eyes. Of course she gifted her
diminutive ones hugging kisses a lot. “Children can never be adult-like they
are only childlike,” thought Suchitra with a beam on her face.
*Amma- mother
*Amma- mother
Very impressive...
ReplyDeletethis line makes it more impressive - Children can never be adult-like they are only childlike
Thank you,Vineeta.
DeleteIt is a nice tale. And all is well that ends well. Good that the small child was saved just on time.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Ganesan.
Delete“Children can never be adult-like they are only childlike,”
ReplyDeletesays all beautifully written
Thank you,sm.
ReplyDeleteEww...scary! You crafted it really well!
ReplyDeleteThank you,Tarang.
DeleteHmm all that is good with that ends well.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Anil.
ReplyDeletethats some imagination there...
ReplyDeleteThank you,deeps.
ReplyDeletethat's a cute story! It is really not safe to leave infants with children.
ReplyDeleteinterestingly penned :)
I posted a comment here? have you recv it?
ReplyDeleteThank you,Ankita.
ReplyDeleteThank God nothing happened to the baby. The little girl was only carrying out her mothers orders and she cannot be blamed. It is always wise to keep an eye on little children at all times.
ReplyDeleteFantastic story.
Thank you,Joseph.
DeleteScared me for a moment.... but in the end it felt like a good story
ReplyDeleteThank you,Namrata.
ReplyDelete