Thursday, June 16, 2016

The Wind of Power high!




The Wind of power much high,
The Earth of spread very vast
The Sun of face so bright
And the shower of wakeful strength,
Supremacy theirs they set up
Well in a sovereign way
That, to undo by any animate
Is a dream fulfilled never.

Stroke they, the Beings tenderly
And their belongings dearly
Spreading sparkling radiance everywhere
Keeping things in a vibrant order.
The Clouds collect complex inferior
As they are dark in skin colour tone.
Envy they, the Sun, for He is one to own
A complexion always quite bright 

Veil they fully His countenance
Expressing clemency not a bit.
And arrives there hence the Wind grand
Aiding assistance to Sun, the great.
With much ease He slickly
 Drives away the Clouds cruel.
O! The Sun in gratitude gifts Him a grin
A grin with delight and winning appeal.

Sings Wind for Mother Nature,
Twists He brilliantly in glory,
Resists He the barriers on his way,
And Sweeps away them doubtlessly.
Defeats He the heat in fury,
Fanning all around with his wings,
Kindles flames for food
And saves He lives, donating breath.


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24 comments:

  1. the power could be felt in the images used here...nicely done...

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  2. I love the sun in gratitude, gifting him a grin.......I enjoyed the descriptions of wind, sun and clouds very much. All busy beings.

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  3. You make the wind a good friend here, ne that removes obstacles and sings to us. Very fine. I'd like to have that power.

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  4. Intricate and complex imagery!

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  5. Sings Wind for Mother Nature,
    Twists He brilliantly in glory,
    Resists He the barriers on his way,
    And Sweeps away them doubtlessly.
    Defeats He the heat in fury,
    Fanning all around with his wings,
    Kindles flames for food
    And saves He lives, donating breath.

    Beautiful lines...

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  6. A really good one... Loved this especially, "Envy they, the Sun, for He is one to own... A complexion always firly bright"

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  7. Quite a powerful take on the prompt..!

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  8. Enjoyed reading this beautiful poem.

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  9. There is a sweeping majesty in this poem :)

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  10. And saves He lives...
    A sweet refreshing breeze in your verse. There is gentle kindness in this sovereign.

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  11. beautifully connected wind and sun and earth
    nice poem

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  12. Hello,

    Fabulous poem on the wind. The wind is mighty and strong to demolish obstacles on its way but also gives life.

    I loved the following lines.

    With much ease He slickly
    Drives away the Clouds cruel.
    O! The Sun in gratitude gifts Him a grin
    A grin with delight and winning appeal.

    Best wishes

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