The Wind of power so great,
the shower of strength with weight,
the Earth of spread very vast,
and the Sun with a face so bright
set up supremacy theirs,
well in a sovereign way
that, for a creature to undo,
will be a dream never fulfilled.
Cuddle they the animate dearly
and their belongings o’ tenderly,
spreading sparkling radiance,
keeping things in vibrant order.
The Clouds collect low complex
as they are dark in skin colour tone.
Envy they the Sun
for His spirited lovely look.
Veil they fully His visage
without even a bit of pity;
arrives there the Wind grand
granting aids to the great Sun.
With much ease, resists the Wind,
the Clouds’ cruel attitude.
O! The Sun in gratitude
gifts Wind a grin with delight.
Sings Wind for Mother Nature,
in glory, shows his glamourous disco,
breaks the entire blocks on the way,
and Sweeps away them doubtlessly.
Defeats He the furious heat,
fans things with wings so well,
Kindles flames for cooking food
and saves
He lives, donating breath.
the power could be felt in the images used here...nicely done...
ReplyDeleteThank you,Sumana.
DeleteI love the sun in gratitude, gifting him a grin.......I enjoyed the descriptions of wind, sun and clouds very much. All busy beings.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Sherry.
DeleteYou make the wind a good friend here, ne that removes obstacles and sings to us. Very fine. I'd like to have that power.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Susan.
DeleteIntricate and complex imagery!
ReplyDeleteThank you,Mary.
DeleteSings Wind for Mother Nature,
ReplyDeleteTwists He brilliantly in glory,
Resists He the barriers on his way,
And Sweeps away them doubtlessly.
Defeats He the heat in fury,
Fanning all around with his wings,
Kindles flames for food
And saves He lives, donating breath.
Beautiful lines...
Thank you,Vineeta.
DeleteA really good one... Loved this especially, "Envy they, the Sun, for He is one to own... A complexion always firly bright"
ReplyDeleteThank you,Loco.
DeleteQuite a powerful take on the prompt..!
ReplyDeleteThank you,Saana.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading this beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you,SG.
DeleteThere is a sweeping majesty in this poem :)
ReplyDeleteThank you,Jae.
ReplyDeleteAnd saves He lives...
ReplyDeleteA sweet refreshing breeze in your verse. There is gentle kindness in this sovereign.
Thank you,Leslie.
Deletebeautifully connected wind and sun and earth
ReplyDeletenice poem
Thank you,sm.
ReplyDeleteHello,
ReplyDeleteFabulous poem on the wind. The wind is mighty and strong to demolish obstacles on its way but also gives life.
I loved the following lines.
With much ease He slickly
Drives away the Clouds cruel.
O! The Sun in gratitude gifts Him a grin
A grin with delight and winning appeal.
Best wishes
Thank you,Joseph.
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