Thursday, June 16, 2016

The Wind of Power high!

The Wind of power so great,

 the shower of strength with weight,

the Earth of spread very vast,

and the Sun with a face so bright

set up supremacy theirs,

well in a sovereign way

that, for a creature to undo,

will be a dream never fulfilled.


Cuddle they the animate dearly

and their belongings o’ tenderly,

spreading sparkling radiance,

keeping things in vibrant order.

The Clouds collect low complex

as they are dark in skin colour tone.

Envy they the Sun

 for His spirited lovely look.


Veil they fully His visage

without even a bit of pity;

arrives there the Wind grand

granting aids to the great Sun.

With much ease, resists the Wind,

 the Clouds’ cruel attitude.

O! The Sun in gratitude

 gifts Wind a grin with delight.


Sings Wind for Mother Nature,

 in glory, shows his glamourous disco,

breaks the entire blocks on the way,

and Sweeps away them doubtlessly.

Defeats He the furious heat,

fans things with  wings so well,

Kindles flames for cooking food

 and saves He lives, donating breath.

24 comments:

  1. the power could be felt in the images used here...nicely done...

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  2. I love the sun in gratitude, gifting him a grin.......I enjoyed the descriptions of wind, sun and clouds very much. All busy beings.

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  3. You make the wind a good friend here, ne that removes obstacles and sings to us. Very fine. I'd like to have that power.

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  4. Intricate and complex imagery!

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  5. Sings Wind for Mother Nature,
    Twists He brilliantly in glory,
    Resists He the barriers on his way,
    And Sweeps away them doubtlessly.
    Defeats He the heat in fury,
    Fanning all around with his wings,
    Kindles flames for food
    And saves He lives, donating breath.

    Beautiful lines...

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  6. A really good one... Loved this especially, "Envy they, the Sun, for He is one to own... A complexion always firly bright"

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  7. Quite a powerful take on the prompt..!

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  8. Enjoyed reading this beautiful poem.

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  9. There is a sweeping majesty in this poem :)

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  10. And saves He lives...
    A sweet refreshing breeze in your verse. There is gentle kindness in this sovereign.

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  11. beautifully connected wind and sun and earth
    nice poem

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  12. Hello,

    Fabulous poem on the wind. The wind is mighty and strong to demolish obstacles on its way but also gives life.

    I loved the following lines.

    With much ease He slickly
    Drives away the Clouds cruel.
    O! The Sun in gratitude gifts Him a grin
    A grin with delight and winning appeal.

    Best wishes

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