Paint travels in railway stations,
pictures bright on canvas around.
The multi-hued picture shows us
actions slow and fast in stations.
Humming sound of stirring people
remind us of buzzing-bees in hives.
Bag and baggage load and unload
coolies in their special pattern.
Kith and kin while helping dears,
hinder them, the beggars for alms.
Slowly trains, start the Drivers,
with a view to speedily moving.
Trains are the wings of common man,
to fly in journeys, long and short.
Tedious turns the travels when
one can’t access restful berths.
Plan your trips for comfort-making,
lighten luggage for less discomfort.
Prudent hugs impossible nothing,
diligent get the result 'possible'.
Laziness is a craven subject,
pushes hard work, defeat to the abyss,
Set a goal to gain your craves,
and always try to expel loss.
Do you find anything in the words used here?
Hari OM
ReplyDeleteJourneys of hope! YAM xx
Thank you,Yamini.
Delete"Expel loss," an intersting idea....
ReplyDeletethank you,Annell.
ReplyDeleteSet a goal to gain your craves. I like that.
ReplyDeletethank you,SG.
Deletevery positive...
ReplyDeleteThank you,Vineeta.
ReplyDeleteHmm , first gave a decent picture , a visual imaging and then ended with some advise.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Anil.
DeleteThank you,Anil.
Deletevery nicely written
ReplyDeleteThank you,Sujatha.
ReplyDeleteI could relate to life's journey.Very nicely written.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Partha.
Deleteone should plan the train travel in advance.
ReplyDeletebeautifully written captured human emotions
Thank you,sm.
Deleteincredible lines!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteHello,
ReplyDeleteSuch a wonderful descriptions of the railway station which is is beehive of activity.
You ended fabulously with a great advice for success. wonderful thoughts
Best wihes
Thank you,Joseph.
DeleteIn these lines I have used antonyms a lot.
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