Saturday, October 8, 2016

Common Man’s Wings!



Paint travels in railway stations,

pictures bright on canvas around.

The multi-hued picture shows us

actions slow and fast in stations.

Humming sound of stirring people

remind us of buzzing-bees in hives.

Bag and baggage load and unload

coolies in their special pattern.

Kith and kin while helping dears,

hinder them, the beggars for alms.

Slowly trains, start the Drivers,

with a view to speedily moving.

Trains are the wings of common man,

to fly in journeys, long and short.

Tedious turns the travels when

one can’t access restful berths.

Plan your trips for comfort-making,

lighten luggage for less discomfort.

Prudent hugs impossible nothing,

diligent get the result 'possible'.

Laziness is a craven subject,

pushes hard work, defeat to the abyss,

Set a goal to gain your craves,

and always try to expel loss.



Do you find anything in the words used here?



22 comments:

  1. "Expel loss," an intersting idea....

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  2. Set a goal to gain your craves. I like that.

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  3. Hmm , first gave a decent picture , a visual imaging and then ended with some advise.

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  4. I could relate to life's journey.Very nicely written.

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  5. one should plan the train travel in advance.
    beautifully written captured human emotions

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  6. Hello,

    Such a wonderful descriptions of the railway station which is is beehive of activity.

    You ended fabulously with a great advice for success. wonderful thoughts

    Best wihes

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  7. In these lines I have used antonyms a lot.

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