Oh! This venerable
visage, great
from the east of our own
globe,
smiling at things found
in front
energy, provides copiously
to all.
The vacuum, your
absence creates,
has an utter dark of tar
colour.
You being the most
beloved, erase
the gloom of our lady
green.
The mortals await
you in your quay,
well,long for your light and sight.
As the friend of the
universe wide,
your laughter provides us
bright.
The lives of total beasts
n plants are
bound to be wound to your
royal entry.
You form the master universe’s and
emperor of entire beings around.
You mind and maintain subjects yours,
emerge when you out of castle.
The virgin Lotus, a
muddy girl in pool,
observes a penance in
perfect hush.
Sees you while she opens
the eyes
when you are at a survey
of your empire, Sky.
Blowing apart her
meditation pause,
she hugs you dearly in
your warmth.
Hides you, as arrives
the black beauty,
behind her thick dense
long hair;
cuddle her then you
tightly
In a covert delight of
yours.
Night, her name, her mom
gave,
and dissolves she in pain,
as day comes.
Dew drop pretty,
bashfully blinks
And bats fast her
eyelids daringly.
She is in her make-up
you gave,
adorning her in your
spectrum fine
And she has sure a
dazzling look now
expressing slowly
her shy and coy.
Seasons weave the
curtain of clouds
And cloak you sometimes
behind it.
build you holes with
needles of rays
of nature sharp and pointed
much.
Through the crack and break you peep
To watch all subjects under
your rule.
Your apparel very long
and large,
carrying a stylish classy
look
rinse you well in the pouring
water,
wriggle and spread on twigs and trees.
The design new of an uneven
way,
Ha! What a modishness,
the attire has.
I guess the Malayalam version was beautiful and to be frank the translated English, I feel needs more punch and subtlety of words. No offence please.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I don't feel offended since your hand moves for appreciation also.The problem is with regard to translation because finding equivalent words may not wear a poetic coat of the original.However my trial to upgrade will be there.
Deletenice poem
ReplyDeleteThank you ,sm. Pl. keep visiting whenever possible.
Deletebeauty of nature ..well described ..nice post ..
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DeleteThis the first time that I have visited your post. You have written the poem very nicely. The natural beauty of nature has been depicted vividly. I loved reading the lines
ReplyDeleteDew drop pretty, bashfully blinks
And bats her eyelids daringly.
You in return makes her go red and
Paints her in your spectrum fine
Thank you very much, ma'am.
ReplyDeletenice poem.... well described...
ReplyDeletethanks for leaving a comment on my post
Thank you, Krishna.
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