Monday, February 25, 2013

The Venerable Visage



Oh! This venerable visage, great
from the east of our own globe,
 smiling at things found in front 
energy, provides copiously to all. 
 The vacuum, your absence creates,
has an utter dark of tar colour.

You being the most beloved, erase
the gloom of our lady green.
 The mortals await you in your quay,
 well,long for your light and sight.
As the friend of the universe wide,
your laughter provides us bright.

The lives of total beasts n plants are
bound to be wound to your royal entry.
You form the master universe’s and
emperor of entire beings around.
You mind and maintain subjects yours,
emerge when you out of castle.

The virgin Lotus, a muddy girl in pool,
observes a penance in perfect hush.
Sees you while she opens the eyes
when you are at a survey of your empire, Sky.
Blowing apart her meditation pause,
she hugs you dearly in your warmth.

Hides you, as arrives the black beauty,
behind her thick dense long hair;
cuddle her then you tightly
In a covert delight of yours.
Night, her name, her mom gave,
and dissolves she in pain, as day comes.

Dew drop pretty, bashfully blinks
 And bats fast her eyelids daringly.
She is in her make-up you gave,
adorning her in your spectrum fine
 And she has sure a dazzling look now
 expressing slowly her shy and coy.

Seasons weave the curtain of clouds
And cloak you sometimes behind it.
build you holes with needles of rays
of nature sharp and pointed much.
Through the crack and break you peep
To watch all subjects under your rule.

 Your apparel very long and large,
carrying a stylish classy look
rinse you well in the pouring water,
 wriggle and spread on twigs and trees.
The design new of an uneven way,
Ha! What a modishness, the attire has.

10 comments:

  1. I guess the Malayalam version was beautiful and to be frank the translated English, I feel needs more punch and subtlety of words. No offence please.

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    1. Thank you, I don't feel offended since your hand moves for appreciation also.The problem is with regard to translation because finding equivalent words may not wear a poetic coat of the original.However my trial to upgrade will be there.

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    1. Thank you ,sm. Pl. keep visiting whenever possible.

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  3. beauty of nature ..well described ..nice post ..

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  4. This the first time that I have visited your post. You have written the poem very nicely. The natural beauty of nature has been depicted vividly. I loved reading the lines
    Dew drop pretty, bashfully blinks
    And bats her eyelids daringly.
    You in return makes her go red and
    Paints her in your spectrum fine

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  5. nice poem.... well described...

    thanks for leaving a comment on my post

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