(I haven't tried Haiku so far.A small step here.)
Weather!
children in cheer; upset them
thunder and lightning
Flower!
flower beetle; covet him
bloom with covert glance.
Stork!
The storks' flock stands still.
The children at merriment
scamper on the ridge.
Pond!
Pond lurks keenly for
the swimmers;
Little men leap
and turmoil water
nice short poems
ReplyDeleteHi Prayaga. You have written very impressive haikus. They dont look like beginners' effort. I liked the 'Pond' very much.
ReplyDeleteThank you,madam Menon.
DeleteVery nice rudra......do tell me what is this haiku all about........good read dearie
ReplyDeleteThank you.A haiku means a three-lined poem.Two lines-first two or last two- should be connected and the other one independent. It depicts mainly nature. Some people write about other topics also.You very well can.
ReplyDeleteI really like this . Keep dreaming, imagining, fantasising and writing.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much.
Deletebeetle flies to a flower more conspicuous..
ReplyDeleteloved this line..
haiku is fun to read... so much in few words..
Thank you,Jyothi.
DeleteHow I love them all!! Great imagery, rudra!! Can't believe it that you are a beginner. Kudos...
ReplyDeleteJust watch out the syllables--first line should have 5 syllables, 2nd line 7 and the third line should again have 5 syllables. Use the google-syllable-counter for quick ref.
Thank you,very much Panchali for your suggestions. I will definitely keep that in mind.
DeleteLoved your attempt at Haiku dear :)
ReplyDeleteAm yet to try it though.
Thank you, me.I am sure you can and you try.
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