Thursday, March 14, 2013

A Few Globules.


(I haven't tried Haiku so far.A small step here.)

 Weather

In halcyon weather
 The children all play cheerfully.
 Thunder follows  lightning.
  

Flower

The little flower covet for
The beloved beetle with covert glances.
Beetle flies  to flower  conspicuous.


Stork

The storks' flock stand still.
The children at merriment
 Scamper over the ridge.


Pond

The pond lurks eagerly
for the swimmers for their action.
Little men dart, turmoil water


  
sarala

14 comments:

  1. Hi Prayaga. You have written very impressive haikus. They dont look like beginners' effort. I liked the 'Pond' very much.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Very nice rudra......do tell me what is this haiku all about........good read dearie

    ReplyDelete
  3. Thank you.A haiku means a three-lined poem.Two lines-first two or last two- should be connected and the other one independent. It depicts mainly nature. Some people write about other topics also.You very well can.

    ReplyDelete
  4. I really like this . Keep dreaming, imagining, fantasising and writing.

    ReplyDelete
  5. beetle flies to a flower more conspicuous..
    loved this line..
    haiku is fun to read... so much in few words..

    ReplyDelete
  6. How I love them all!! Great imagery, rudra!! Can't believe it that you are a beginner. Kudos...
    Just watch out the syllables--first line should have 5 syllables, 2nd line 7 and the third line should again have 5 syllables. Use the google-syllable-counter for quick ref.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you,very much Panchali for your suggestions. I will definitely keep that in mind.

      Delete
  7. Loved your attempt at Haiku dear :)

    Am yet to try it though.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you, me.I am sure you can and you try.

      Delete