Thursday, March 14, 2013

A Few Globules.


(I haven't tried Haiku so far.A small step here.)

 Weather!

 Halcyon weather,
 children in cheer; upset them
 thunder and lightning

  
Flower!


With delight flies to
 flower beetle; covet him
 bloom  with  covert glance.

Stork!


The storks' flock stands still.
The children at merriment
 scamper on the ridge.


Pond!

Pond lurks keenly for
 the swimmers; Little men leap
 and turmoil water

14 comments:

  1. Hi Prayaga. You have written very impressive haikus. They dont look like beginners' effort. I liked the 'Pond' very much.

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  2. Very nice rudra......do tell me what is this haiku all about........good read dearie

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  3. Thank you.A haiku means a three-lined poem.Two lines-first two or last two- should be connected and the other one independent. It depicts mainly nature. Some people write about other topics also.You very well can.

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  4. I really like this . Keep dreaming, imagining, fantasising and writing.

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  5. beetle flies to a flower more conspicuous..
    loved this line..
    haiku is fun to read... so much in few words..

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  6. How I love them all!! Great imagery, rudra!! Can't believe it that you are a beginner. Kudos...
    Just watch out the syllables--first line should have 5 syllables, 2nd line 7 and the third line should again have 5 syllables. Use the google-syllable-counter for quick ref.

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    1. Thank you,very much Panchali for your suggestions. I will definitely keep that in mind.

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  7. Loved your attempt at Haiku dear :)

    Am yet to try it though.

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    1. Thank you, me.I am sure you can and you try.

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