Waterfalls!
Water falls merrily on
Cliffs and they smile of goose bumps.
Silently flow burns.
Drizzly weather, falling water
Arouse poesy in poetic mind.
Words flow into lines.
Water drizzles, sprinkles in glee.
Waterfalls bathing rocks and ground
Pulls yokels in attraction.
sarala.
For Haiku Heights.
For Haiku Heights.
nice haiku
ReplyDeleteThank you,sm
DeleteGood attempt. umm may be a bit more simpler, perhaps?
ReplyDeleteThank you,anil. Ain't I using simpler words?
DeleteAmazing, Awesome
ReplyDeleteReminding Niagara
Very Romantic.
Thank you,SG.
DeleteI have a question. I thought haiku poems follow the 5-7-5 syllables rule. The above poem does not. Am I making a mistake somewhere?
ReplyDeleteI think I have almost checked the syllables.If one or two are mistaken means my ignorance. Poesy and poetic have two syllables each..
ReplyDeleteIt's good to read you poetry here.
ReplyDeleteThank you,alice.
Deletebeautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you,Ankur.
DeleteMay be not. I read them a third time or so and it seems ok. But yet I guess polishing after writing will get more subtle words.
ReplyDeleteThank you.I'll try.But syllable restriction makes me skip articles,interjections,conjunctions sometimes. And I feel that this much extent only my potential will carry me.Pl.visit my stories too.
DeleteArouse poesy in poetic mind.
ReplyDeleteWords flow into lines.
You have done it again, lovely!
Thank you, rama.
DeleteI could imagine the waterfalls :)
ReplyDeleteThank you,me.
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