Musical drizzle
Dear kid snug in bed,
mother
Hugs; autumn frost melts.
Shower sings ditty,
Autumn frost twist; little men
Lie under blanket.
Early frosts chill
Earth, Sun winks and cuddles her.
She turns shy and red.
Dawn-shower, chill,
Sunflower poor pules; father
Sun cuddles him tight.
Autumn frost smothers
Creatures; saviour sun rescues.
Beings sigh relieved.
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.fi/2014/07/carpe-diem-508-basho-2-autumn-frost.html
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.fi/2014/07/carpe-diem-508-basho-2-autumn-frost.html
Beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteThank you.
ReplyDeleteI am waiting for autumn ... need respite from this summer heat :-/
ReplyDeleteIt is round the corner.Enjoy.
DeleteWelcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Rudra Prayaga ... what a wonderful series of haiku you share here in response on our prompt with Basho's haiku. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteBy the way: I am your host at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.
Thank you,Kristjaan.
DeleteExcellent Loved the description.
ReplyDeleteThank you,SG.
DeleteLoved the imagery your words evoked. I could feel the chill of the Autumn frost, see it painted on the window panes in my mind. Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Kathy.
ReplyDeleteJust enjoying the heavenly showers! Was sick from morning and showers made me get out of bed with a smile!
ReplyDeleteThank you,Sun bloom.I have penned a haiku here on Sunflower(Sun Bloom).
DeletePretty. Well thought.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Anil.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, warm touch to your haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Hamish.
DeleteLoved the musical drizzle Sarala :) Summer heat is making me yearn for rains and cooler autumn..
ReplyDeleteThank you,Reshma.
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