Tuesday, July 8, 2014

Autumn Frost!



Musical drizzle
 Dear kid snug in bed, mother
Hugs; autumn frost melts.

Shower sings ditty,
Autumn frost twist; little men
Lie under blanket.

Early frosts chill
Earth, Sun winks and cuddles her.
She turns shy and red.

Dawn-shower, chill,
Sunflower poor pules; father
Sun cuddles him tight.

Autumn frost smothers
Creatures; saviour sun rescues.
Beings sigh relieved.

http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.fi/2014/07/carpe-diem-508-basho-2-autumn-frost.html

18 comments:

  1. I am waiting for autumn ... need respite from this summer heat :-/

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  2. Welcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Rudra Prayaga ... what a wonderful series of haiku you share here in response on our prompt with Basho's haiku. Thank you for sharing.
    By the way: I am your host at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.

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  3. Excellent Loved the description.

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  4. Loved the imagery your words evoked. I could feel the chill of the Autumn frost, see it painted on the window panes in my mind. Brilliant.

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  5. Just enjoying the heavenly showers! Was sick from morning and showers made me get out of bed with a smile!

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    1. Thank you,Sun bloom.I have penned a haiku here on Sunflower(Sun Bloom).

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  6. Beautiful, warm touch to your haiku.

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  7. Loved the musical drizzle Sarala :) Summer heat is making me yearn for rains and cooler autumn..

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