Friday, July 25, 2014

Cuckoo’s Cry!

 Here I have not taken the sense of 'Cry', but  the cry as  'Singing'.




Cuckoo coos tunes
 Sweet and cute, Spring rubs eyes, wakes
Aha! Flowers smile.

Lays egg  in crow's nest
Idle Cuckoo,poor Crow hatches.
 Brood cries for mother. 

Sings Cuckoo, on drum
Woodpecker, a cute concert.
Crows, sparrows enjoy.

Spring’s advent, Cuckoo
The black beauty gaily coos.
Blooms open eyes wide.

sarala

For http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/


14 comments:

  1. The first and last show a light, very nice touch, delighting in nature - very warm! I like the 2nd and 3rd oo. Very nice!

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  2. crwos sparrows enjoy beautiful

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  3. Very fragile images you have painted here with your words Rudra ...

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  4. Just one word Sarala. Super.

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  5. I'm really loving the joy in the third poem :D

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  6. I'm really loving the joy in the 3rd poem -- this is wonderful! :)

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  7. A serene warmth flowing in your haiku ... lovely :-)

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  8. Loved reading the story of cuckoo, it was like hearing a cuckoo's song :)

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