Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Dawn!


With ardour the dark
Tries to clasp Sun; strides away
He to his love dawn.

Hides he from dark
In scorn and awaits his love;
Shyly looms Dawn there .

Sun in passion hugs
His Dawn;gladly celebrate all
Beings  their meeting.
  
Farewell, bids Dawn, as
Her lover's day's load ,aware is
 She; next day meet they.

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  1. Yamini MacLeanNovember 4, 2014 at 12:43 PM

    Hari Om
    Love your images - the third is a winner!!! YAM xx

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  2. KParthasarathiNovember 4, 2014 at 4:23 PM

    A good poetic depiction of the daily event

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  3. SGNovember 4, 2014 at 6:29 PM

    Nice Haiku. As Rabindranath Tagore said: Faith is the bird that feels the light when the dawn is still dark.

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    1. rudraprayagaNovember 6, 2014 at 4:06 AM

      Yes, the brightness of light also is concerned about one's faith.Thank you for quoting Tagore's brilliant version.

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  4. anilkurup59November 4, 2014 at 6:42 PM

    Seems like ardhanari - this dawn and Sun subject

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    1. rudraprayagaNovember 6, 2014 at 4:07 AM

      Yea,it is the perspective of the viewer.Thank you.

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  5. Amrit SinhaNovember 4, 2014 at 9:06 PM

    Sun and dawn... the perfect couple :)

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    1. rudraprayagaNovember 6, 2014 at 4:09 AM

      Yea, Sun peeps to see the stylish entry of dawn.Thank you,Amrit.

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  6. smNovember 6, 2014 at 10:40 AM

    Shyly looms Dawn there . Sun in passion hugs
    beautiful

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  7. UnknownNovember 6, 2014 at 12:21 PM

    Love the story in this. Very brilliantly created! ♥

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  8. ReshmaNovember 6, 2014 at 6:20 PM

    Loved the way you brought out sun and dawn as a couple Sarala. Esp the thought of dawn peeping like a shy bride.

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  9. rudraprayagaNovember 7, 2014 at 4:01 AM

    Thank you,Reshma.

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  10. jazzytowerNovember 8, 2014 at 6:37 AM

    Love the second one.

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  11. Rama AnanthNovember 10, 2014 at 6:33 PM

    Loved the meeting of the sun and dawn, beautiful!

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