Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Dawn!


With ardour the dark
Tries to clasp Sun; strides away
He to his love dawn.

Hides he from dark
In scorn and awaits his love;
Shyly looms Dawn there .

Sun in passion hugs
His Dawn;gladly celebrate all
Beings  their meeting.
  
Farewell, bids Dawn, as
Her lover's day's load ,aware is
 She; next day meet they.

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20 comments:

  1. Hari Om
    Love your images - the third is a winner!!! YAM xx

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  2. A good poetic depiction of the daily event

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  3. Nice Haiku. As Rabindranath Tagore said: Faith is the bird that feels the light when the dawn is still dark.

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    1. Yes, the brightness of light also is concerned about one's faith.Thank you for quoting Tagore's brilliant version.

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  4. Seems like ardhanari - this dawn and Sun subject

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    1. Yea,it is the perspective of the viewer.Thank you.

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  5. Sun and dawn... the perfect couple :)

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    1. Yea, Sun peeps to see the stylish entry of dawn.Thank you,Amrit.

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  6. Shyly looms Dawn there . Sun in passion hugs
    beautiful

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  7. Love the story in this. Very brilliantly created! ♥

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  8. Loved the way you brought out sun and dawn as a couple Sarala. Esp the thought of dawn peeping like a shy bride.

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  9. Loved the meeting of the sun and dawn, beautiful!

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