Wednesday, October 28, 2015

First Day in School!


Receives new tender
Feet, the Campus in wait for
Her  next study-year.

New bag, new dress, kid
Excited, gets up, gets ready
Fast and sits on bike.

Enters kid as a
Bud; sways in campus-breeze with
More buds and blooms bright.

Kids all in same hues
Seem blooms of one plant, though  much
Hue and cry greets us.

Some buds droop, little
Eyes shower tears when gets the
Teacher into class..

 An ensemble of
Tear-rains and scream-thunder fills
 Campus with hubbub.

At exodus looms
 bike father's; smile exotic
adorns soft visage.


For Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.


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19 comments:

  1. Yamini MacLeanOctober 28, 2015 at 9:02 AM

    Hari OM
    I particularly enjoyed the third in the series! YAM xx

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  2. rudraprayagaOctober 29, 2015 at 10:18 AM

    Thank you,Yamini.

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  3. rudraprayagaOctober 29, 2015 at 10:33 AM

    Thank you,Yamini.

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  4. Jamshed AzmiOctober 29, 2015 at 11:38 AM

    First Day in School. Very interesting post here.

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  5. Ankita October 29, 2015 at 12:06 PM

    heheh! made me pleasantly nostalgic!

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  6. SGOctober 30, 2015 at 12:06 PM

    First Day in School. Memories.

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  7. smOctober 30, 2015 at 12:28 PM

    first day in school a instant flashback
    nice poem

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  8. anilkurup59October 31, 2015 at 9:06 PM

    Good, to recall the first day in school

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  9. Krishna/കൃഷ്ണOctober 31, 2015 at 11:11 PM

    Interest Post

    Thanks

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  10. LocomenteNovember 4, 2015 at 1:34 AM

    Loved this... Took me back to my 1st day... Mis my school days :(

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  11. Amrit SinhaNovember 4, 2015 at 8:00 PM

    First day in school, those tender and innocent moments :-)

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  12. smNovember 10, 2015 at 9:39 AM

    Happy Diwali to you and all

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  13. Vineeta YashswiNovember 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM

    Very true poem...

    Some buds droop, little
    Eyes shower tears when gets the
    Teacher into class..

    An ensemble of
    Tear-rains and scream-thunder fills
    Campus with hubbub.

    Lovely...

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  14. Zeena Ravi വള്ളികുന്നംDecember 18, 2015 at 6:59 PM

    Tender moments of childhood.touching poem

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