Thursday, March 16, 2017

Exit!



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On the Time-stage in
full swing,a ballet performs
the actress Winter.

 Role hers, denoting
 Distress, expresses she for
 Viewers stylishly.

Making the show safe
in hand, hides she  manager
 Sun’s ennui in heart.

Looms late, exits the
Stage early and during the
 Show dims He the light.

Partial is Sun to
The sweet spring with talcum on
 Face and blooms on hair.

Bearing broad grin, Sun
Greets his sweet love, Spring; with
Gloom, Winter exits.


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17 comments:

  1. SGMarch 16, 2017 at 11:43 AM

    Very well expressed the stage performance by the nature.

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  2. Yamini MacLeanMarch 16, 2017 at 2:29 PM

    Hari Om
    ...would love these more if it wasn't for the fact that winter is still very much gripping this town!!! That aside.. lovely! YAM xx

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleMarch 16, 2017 at 6:36 PM

    Beautiful series Rudra

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  4. ShilpaMarch 17, 2017 at 5:50 AM

    Lovely !

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  5. Sujatha SathyaMarch 17, 2017 at 6:35 AM

    Liked the poem especially the "talcum on face" line...So real

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  6. smMarch 17, 2017 at 7:12 AM

    beautiful started with exit and ended with exit

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  7. Pat RMarch 18, 2017 at 8:57 AM

    I enjoyed these very much:)

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  8. rudraprayagaMarch 20, 2017 at 1:19 AM

    Thank you, Jazzy.

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  9. VinithaMarch 22, 2017 at 10:00 PM

    That was a fabulous performance of the seasons through your words, Sarala. Enjoyed it very much. :)

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  10. rudraprayagaMarch 23, 2017 at 3:13 AM

    Thank you, Vinita.

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  11. rudraprayagaMarch 23, 2017 at 3:13 AM

    Thank you, Vinita.

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  12. Rama AnanthMay 2, 2017 at 6:33 AM

    what a lovely poem, loved it.

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  13. rudraprayagaMay 2, 2017 at 10:34 AM

    thank you,Rama.

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