Wednesday, March 14, 2018

Mystic Night!




Dawn, a quiet kid
 When grows into youth, attains
Might and power much.
Noon sights her making his pal,
Noisy Evening envies Dawn.

Wakes up to morning
Stillness,Dawn spreading splendor;
Noon cuddles cute Dawn.
Frowns Evening at Noon and waits
For Dusk with lust to hug her.

Arrives mystic Night
To alert all residents,
For meditation.
For a long rumination
The dwellers well close their eyes.


Forhttp://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/

19 comments:

  1. Hari OM
    I particularly like the middle verse... YAM xx

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  2. After a long time a blog post from you. Beautiful poem. Noisy evening envies dawn. Very true.

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  3. This is beautifully penned. :D


    Long time no see. :P

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  4. Awesome series of tanka ... thank you for sharing.

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  5. Vwey nice. The phases of a day correlates with that if life itself!
    Thank you for your kind words and visit, mean a lot to me!
    Now let me enjoy other poems !

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  6. Amazing poetry my friend!!!

    the way you used the day times with their resemblance with human nature at different stages is so profound and sublime

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  7. beautifully written yes 4 stages of life compared with day beautifully written

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