(Here I have taken foliage in general, not Autumn Foliage.Image from google.)
In bridal wear is
The maid Earth; adorn her dress,
Blooms and foliage.
Steal our sight sure, her
Multi-hued designs on dress.
Eyes we take out not.
Doubles her beauty
Her array's prints of leaves with
Hues and blooms much cute.
Doubles her beauty
Her array's prints of leaves with
Hues and blooms much cute.
At her the groom, Sun
Winks and beams; coyly batting
Eyes she twists and rocks.
Sides with Wind Moon; he
Eclipses Sun from Earth, brings
Dark angst in her mind.
Envies Wind Sun; blows
Away her Sari , holds she
It tight
and sets right.For http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/
Hari Om
ReplyDeleteHeheheh, lovely images, but that last one really made me smile!!! YAM xx
Thank you,Yamini.
Deleteearth as bride..lovely thought:)
ReplyDeleteThank you,SG.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Ankita.
ReplyDeleteLoved it! The first few verses are enough to take out my paints and brushes:-)
ReplyDeleteMost welcome for your morning walks through my paintings, that is very generous of you to say that, thank you!
Thank you,Padmaja.
ReplyDeleteLoved the imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Amrit.
Deletebeautiful photo with poem
ReplyDeleteThank you,sm.
DeleteThat's vividly, colorfully painted in words
ReplyDeleteThank you,deeps.
ReplyDeleteYou have written in such a way that your words come together like a painting :)
ReplyDeleteThank you,Loco.
ReplyDeleteWith Earth as bride and Sun as groom you've written it well. Nice poem! :)
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